I came to an unfortunate (fortunate?) conclusion today...
I have crammed two separate stories into one and as a result lost the power in both.
I have no option but return to the drawing board.
Despite the obvious gnashing of teeth and
ripping of garments...
I am undeterred.
The revised storyline is tighter and more compelling.
And the bonus is that the next book is well on its way.
From the ashes something new and better rises...
Holy smokes, Susan. I've been a bit sidelined from blog-reading lately, and had no idea! How awful/wonderful!!
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